I have been sitting on a couple of songs (lyrics) I wrote, always wondering what they would sound like when put to voice and music. I have no knowledge of music, but I do know that normally the music comes first and the lyrics follow, so what was I to do? Send them to Elton John? He is one of the only musicians who puts lyrics to music in collaboration with his long time partner Bernie Taupin.
I had entered a different set of lyrics into a contest for which there was a fee only to be bombarded with promotional material (because they found I had such talent!) <insert LOL here>. Suffice to say, on a freelancer’s budget, nothing quite hit the mark with me.
Recently I came across someone (D
willing to set my lyrics to voice and music. He tweaked very little and for that I am very grateful. Finally, this morning, I opened the file to find a Song. Until now, I didn’t consider my work to be a song, by my definition. It is now.I have known forever that I am a soft touch, but while listening to this for the first time, I found myself crying. I wrote it, I knew the ending and yet emotion overwhelmed me.
Hope you all will give it a listen 🙂 I love the end result!
Please click HERE to listen to LILITH and EVE
LYRICS
LILTH and EVE
Unleashed, unhinged , deranged,
plain ole crazy’s how you had me feelin’
Just lookin’ past the dance floor
On the bar side where you stood.
Telling lips and thighs
Black leather, heels
Playing with your eyes and hair
Furtive glances everywhere
Til your eyes locked with mine.
Right then and there I knew you were the one
I’d been searching for so long
My Lilith and my Eve a woman of my heart.
You had me laughin in my daydreams
You had me screamin in my nightmares
You were my Lilith and my Eve
You had me ever on my knees
You got me baby, beggin please
Down to the lake I spied on you
Fair mermaid in my midst
All delicate angelic like, wonton moves
Body swimming languishing in time
Furtive glances everywhere
Til your eyes locked with mine
Once more I knew you were the one
I’d been searching for so long…
My Lilith and my Eve a woman of my heart.
You had me laughin in my daydreams
You had me screamin in my nightmares
You were my Lilith and my Eve
You had me ever on my knees
You had me baby, beggin please
Some say it’s true and rightly so
That loves a burning thing
I say to that exactly right
and precisely to this day
the force your fire lit me with
will surely see me to my grave.
You had me laughin in my daydreams
You had me screamin in my nightmares
You were my Lilith and my Eve
You had me ever on my knees
You had me baby, beggin please
Your bags are packed and shower took
I heard you cryin all the while
Wiping out my smiling heart
As car keys clink and fade away
I should have known
A girl like you would never stay.
You had me laughin in my daydreams
You had me screamin in my nightmares
You are my Lilith and my Eve
You have me ever on my knees
You have me baby, beggin please …
Lesley Fletcher is a writer (freelance, books, content, lyrics,stage plays) as well as a visual artist specializing in monoprints. To learn more about her please visit the tabs here on WordPress or her website at http://www.LesleyFletcher.com
Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. said:
It was brilliant Lesley and definitely a contact to keep should I decide a lyric deserves similar treatment.. he has a great voice and the music was perfect. xx
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Yes, he has a sweet guitar and an everyman’s voice. I agree. xx
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Aquileana said:
The song is beautiful, Lesley…. The music and lyrics are just stunning!.
Thanks for sharing! … Best wishes to you. Aquileana ⭐
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greatpoetrymhf said:
Wondrous shared with delight even though I cannot spell.
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
I have the power to correct it 🙂 Blessings your way, sweet woman.
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greatpoetrymhf said:
Reblogged this on Greatpoetrymhf's Weblog and commented:
Les FLetcher shares the love….in so many ways
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LuAnn said:
This was beautiful Lesley. How proud you must be!
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Wonderful to see you LuAnn – So happy to see you on the road again 🙂 – If you run into any music producers, send them my way will you? Thanks for coming by. Glad to know you enjoyed the song!
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LuAnn said:
You are one amazingly talented gal Lesley! 🙂
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Mary said:
Lesley, what a very proud moment. Beautifully powerful lyrics – Doug did an awesome job.
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
It is Mary, thanks so much! (on Doug’s behalf too)
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Susan Scott said:
Just beautiful Les, thank you so much for sharing it with us. So gentle, emotive, his voice with the strumming of the geet. The words are extremely powerful Les. Total win-win, the lyrics with music …
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Thanks Susan. Doug has a link to the blog so hopefully he will receive the compliments. I was just so glad to be able to hear my words in this manner. It changes everything and since you and I had thought the words were meant for a folk-type of music – I can credit you also!
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Roxxroxx said:
Wow! lovely
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Thank you – so glad you enjoyed it! I have to credit the musician though.
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buildingalifeofhope said:
Wonderful words set to wonderful music. A song that will play in my head as I lay down to sleep…. 🙂
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Sweet Dreams are made of this 🙂 good night.
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Gyslaine L. said:
I adore ❤
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Merci Gyslaine – Very good to see you ❤
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Margot Kinberg said:
Oh, Lesley, this is fabulous! The story the lyrics tell is powerful; you’ve chosen the words well. And I really do like the music too! This is just excellent!
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Books & Art - Spirit & Soul - Lesley Fletcher said:
Yay!! Thanks for giving me a smiley day.
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Margot Kinberg said:
Nah, it’s you who’ve made me smile.
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